tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4166344009230376273.post8696283396956207450..comments2023-05-21T04:05:45.025-07:00Comments on BRAIN NATTER: The first of my blindness poemsAnnie C.http://www.blogger.com/profile/07400060507457003234noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4166344009230376273.post-57522067786213968942008-11-16T10:53:00.000-08:002008-11-16T10:53:00.000-08:00I'm liking your blog so far, and your poem, ORBITU...I'm liking your blog so far, and your poem, ORBITUARY, particularly moved me. The sensory details are poignant and stunning; I felt like I was there with a good old-fashioned book in my hands. If I was rating ORBITUARY with my Critical Criteria from LinkOnline or FiDO, I'd give ORBITUARY an A+! (I remember reading an earlier version of this. Did you expand on it, or is my memory playing tricks on me? :-))DorianTBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01357778472575080022noreply@blogger.com