Sunday, November 23, 2008

Removal by Annie C

Removal

I am unfettered
Glass and wire left behind

forsaken
I am the sightless
I denounce frames and lenses
Like false gods

I am a disiple
fear replaced by loss understood

I am the naked prophet
disrobed
after prolonged oppression

I am baptized by blindness

dipped into the water
Fully submerged
The glasses wash away
Swept aside in the river’s current
Sins relinquished.

Like a prophet, I convert
Yet I rise -- a Lazarus
A Believer.

I wonder
If my eyes weren’t taken
would I still be the same?

2008

3 comments:

DorianTB said...

Anniebird, this was one of your most moving poems yet, with a strong, bracing undercurrent of rage mixed with defiance. Your imagery really pops, particularly "I denounce frames and lenses like false gods." Color me wowed!

Take care,
Dori

Annie C. said...

A little late in coming, but thanks for your cmts. I really appreciate them.

Annie C. said...

A little late in coming, but thanks for your cmts. I really appreciate them.